Russell Gayer, author speaker
When Connie and her sister were teenagers, they lived half-a-mile from Dickson Street, which was party central in the college town of Fayetteville, Arkansas. After Mom and Step-Dad had gone to bed, the girls would out slip out their bedroom window and hang out with friends until the wee hours of the morning.
Before they left, the girls would place a folded strip of paper in the door jam. If the paper was there when they returned, no one had entered the room. Paper on the floor meant someone had opened the door and they could expect to be beaten with a belt by their step-dad at breakfast. It was a risky venture, but sounded like a good idea at the time.
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Living across the street from a softball field is nothing to brag about, especially in this neighborhood. The lights stay on until after midnight, people scream, cars peel out, and the place smells of soured beer and urine.
Last week, out of boredom, I decided to forgo watching another rerun of Antique Roadshow and take in a ballgame instead. A couple of teams from the Women’s Industrial League were on the field.
Lo and behold, Rachel Crofton was playing third base for Kawneer. She caught me looking at her and smiled. Walking off the field, her butt swung back and forth like a rusty gate.
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Dear RC,
First I have to do my duty as security guard and inform you that line three you appear to need a “to” between decided and forgo. Please do not let this kind of carelessness happen again or I’ll be forced to take action. Secondly, likening a woman’s backside to a rusty gate is insulting if not funny. A third infraction will result in confiscation of your joy buzzer which I’ve only recently returned.
Shalom,
Pauline Bart WF
PS Home run! 😉
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Dear Pauline,
I intentionally left the “to” out to prove your vigilance to the rest to the rest of the Fictioneers. I have since flagged it with a strike-through so they’d know I was caught.
I expect some of my female readers may take exception with my comparison of Rachel’s wiggle to that of a rusty gate, but in the spirit of Donald Trumpism, I shall not apologize.
Take my joy buzzer if you must, just don’t pierce my whoopee cushion.
RC
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Comparing a woman’s backside to rusty gate is taking literary license to the extreme. I’m with Pauline Bart on this one. I think your whoopee cushion needs to be pierced for Donald Trumpism. The world has room for one only Donald trump – we cannot take any more 🙂
Fun story about Connie and her sisters 🙂
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Oh, I forgot to mention, Rachel is an illegal immigrant who took the third base job away from a hard working, red-blooded American girl whose hips sway with the grace and beauty of a tightly wound pendulum clock.
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Dear RC,
I feel my crochet hook coming after your whoopee cushion so beware! And if we want to be honest here, a red-blooded American girl would have long black hair and moccasins. Just saying.
Shalom,
Pauline Bart WF
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Yes, I know. Connie has Native American blood. No rust.
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Is there really room for even one Donald Trump?
What a pity.
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I’m not sure how he gets through a doorway with a head that large.
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The Women’s Industrial League?? Sounds heavy. Love the story, and the sizzling suggestive power of the eye contact between the two, but I’m wondering if Rachel’s hips creaked when they swayed.
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I don’t know if they creaked, but it wasn’t a smooth motion. Rather forced.
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Better a rusty gate than the broad side of a barn.😉 HellArious, as usual.
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Well, our MC’s swagger is a little rusty too. It takes one to know one.
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methinks i’d prefer a well-oiled one. 🙂
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Me too. Smooth, fluid motion.
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A rusty gate has that slow swing, right?
I can picture it! 😉
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That’s the one.
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The image of a backside swinging like a rusty gate is just too much. I need to go and bleach my imagination. 😦
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Will that make it blonde?
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Hilarious, Russell, but I’m afraid the ladies are going to be after your joy buzzer and whoopee cushion both. You offend one woman, you offend them all. I’m too old to care one way or the other. I totter these days, I don’t swing, as my swinging days are behind me. You can accept that as a pun or not. 😀 — Suzanne
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Yes, it appears I have offended the entire gender. Even my clown nose may be in danger.
Pun accepted, Suzanne.
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I don’t have to say anything. 😉 United we stand!
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Me neither. 🙂 They say the time to stop digging is when you realize you’re in a hole.
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Evidently there are some perks to living across from the baseball diamond to make up for the stale beer and urine. I think an avid baseball fan was born at the end of this story.
-David
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Absolutely. I’m sure he enjoyed watching her stance, both in the field and in the batter’s box.
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If she’s out on a sports field, playing, maybe it doesn’t matter what her bum does?
Good piece Russell.
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It always matters, Mick. That’s why we men have to serve as the bum police.
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Nice image 🙂
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I thought so.
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As a non baseball or sports of any sort fan perhaps you needed to have something to watch to pass the time of day. I think even I would have watched a butt that swung like a rusty gate – the mind boggles.
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I’m sure it was quite entertaining.
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Dear Russell,
I’m afraid that after reading your wonderful, subtle, and one of your best stories ever, I was not concerned about you possibly having offended women, blah, blah, blah….
All I could think about was oiling the gate.
Well done.
Aloha,
Doug
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I like the way you think, Doug. 🙂
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Standing united with my sisters, I’m waving my knitting needles at you in a threatening way and try not to laugh. I mean, industrial league… the swing must be somewhat metallic. More than the rust, the belt of that stepdad upset me. I hope the paper stayed in place…
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One night the paper fell out on its own. The girls didn’t sleep a wink anticipating a severe thrashing which didn’t happen. They were more careful from then on.
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I’m glad Doug mentioned what I’m sure came to all minds upon reading your analogy. Can’t say more than that (or less.) 🙂
janet
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Doug offered the perfect solution for the problem. Sounds like he’s probably oiled a gate or two.
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Well done, Russell, for alienating and antagonising half of the planet in 100 words.
This may be a new FF all-comers record.
(FF – Fearsome Femaledom)
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It’s a gift, C.E. I’ve been alienating and antagonizing women since age five. I’m just reaching a larger audience now.
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I would have thought that with your dashing, James Dean-like good looks, augmented by those apparently jaundice-riddled eyes, you would have the fairer sex falling in heaps at your feet.
But hey, what do I know about such matters?
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They’re felled by the looks, but it’s the Rodney Dangerfield persona that always wrecks the train.
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There’s a visual and an audible that won’t soon leave my mind. Thanks, Russ. 😜
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I should have been a play-by-play announcer. This game will be going into extra innings.
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Very colorful story, Russell. It’s definitely a home run! Made me smile. I used to go to my sister’s softball games.
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Glad you thought it was a home run. I would’ve been happy to made it to second base. Connie and I both played softball for a good number of years.
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Call me crass, but I happen to love that last line. In fact, strike throughs and joy buzzers aside, this is one of my favorite pieces of yours, Russell. It’s got a wry, bittersweet tone that struck a chord for me. I didn’t see the ending as much as a punch line as a wistful last glance. Love it.
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Thank you, Dawn (blushing). I’m glad the last line struck you that way. I believe it was a wistful glance.
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While we all want to be pc (or, maybe some of us do 😉 ), I believe most of us feel a bit let down when folks stop looking, wistful or not.
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Yep, I’ll have to agree
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that’s going a bit too far (or should i say too rusty?)
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It’s a shame that it got rusty. Perhaps he can help with that.
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